Hello all. I know some have been asking on what if anything I am currently writing. This is the story that is closest to being done and I should hopefully finish it soon enough but it's been close for a couple of months now. So please take a look at a preview for it.
Jaina Solo is hot on the tail of the Hutt crimelord Vulgra. Vulgra has made a fortune on teh outer rim as a slaver. Jaina looks to take down his operation. Frustrated and annoyed Vulgra decides to get rid of his problem by enslaving the Jedi as his personal pet.
This is a little more non con then my normal stuff. With a little more physical torture then normal and a realization of her plight by more torturous means then sensual means.
Let me know what you think of the preview.
Jaina’s instincts told her something didn’t feel right. There was a sinister feel in the air and from the force she could get nothing but hard emotions form those around her. The bar she stood in was like every bar on every world that had a space port. Full of different races. Loud obnoxious laughter and silent conversations. Three screens above the central bar showed the recent hoverball championships. One human bartender and four droids served behind the bar with a speed and efficiency that was so slow that Jaina was sure it had been programmed into them because they were the same in every bar. Jaina had grabbed a drink and found herself a booth with her back to a wall. Reaching out with the force she attempted to discover if there were any associates of Vulgra here already. She was sure there was but she didn’t recognize anyone and there was nothing on their surface feelings of anyone in the bar that was giving them away.
Taking a sip from her drink Jaina’s instincts and experience told her trap. She brushed her hand against her lightsaber on her right hip and then her other hand brushed against her blaster on her left hip. Jaina was no fool and had thought this was a possibility. Being raised by Han and Leia Solo certainly made her more then aware that she could come under attack at almost any time. There were a couple of Weequys who thought they were being cleaver and not keeping their eyes on her but Jaina noticed them. Weequys were a tough species and those employed in a Hutt’s service were often brutal and more the shoot first ask questions later people. There was a Wookie in the bar too that kept giving her glances but Jaina wasn’t sure about him. His fur was singed in places and he carried his left arm a little gingerly but Jaina had known a lot of Wookies and it wasn’t often you found them on the other side of the law but it had happened before. There were a few humans sprinkled throughout the bar too that were giving her little glances. In her hooded appearance she really didn’t look any different then anyone else in there and even her gender was a little concealed so she certainly wasn’t drawing attention that way. Her danger sense though was spiking and she wasn’t sure if that was something to do with a real threat or a rising anxiety level. Forcing herself to clam a moment she took another sip of her dink and quickly ran through a Jedi calming technique. It helped clear her mind and focus her. There was a danger in the bar, it was aimed at her but it wasn’t coming from some of the people she may have suspected before. The Wookie was more curious then anything. Pain radiated from him with his arm and his singed fur. He would nto be engaging in a fight unless he absolutely had to. A couple of the humans were certainly eyeing her but not as many as she had thought intially.
There was a senses from outside though that there were more. Far mor people in this area of the city then there should be at this time of night and certainly arraying themselves in a web like situation. Jaina grimaced as sshe took another sip of her drink. It was a trap and it was a well planned and layered one. Which suggested they knew it was her. Which also hinted they would be prepared and confident in taking down a Jedi. Vulgra had killed spies and law enforcement before, Jaina knew capture here meant death. IN the war she had allowed her coldness about death to interfere with herself and she had damaged relationships because of it but she had come through it. Death was apart of life and certainly a part of the force. She did not fear death but she no longer welcomed it.
Quietly putting her drink down on the table and gettign up Jaina eyed no less then twenty people in the bar stiffen and move when she got up. With pace she moved to the door. A few steps from it four huge Gamoeron guards appeared from outside and blocked the way. Their grunts were loud enough to interupt every conversation in the bar. People tutned to look and at their appearance people dove under their tables and hid behidn their chairs. Even the bartender and the droids ducked behind the bar. Jaina knew Gameroens were a large spesis but they did not deserve that reaction. Didn’t normally get it anywhere else as well. Which meant everyone knew whose guards those were. Jaina placed her hands upright in a mock surrender. Though Gameroens could understand basic they could nto talk.
“Okay, I don’t want any trouble here” Jaina said loudly enough to whoever was in charge of this setup.
“Should have thought about that before you started interrupted Vulgra’s business Jedi scum” A human from behind her said. He was reaching for his blaster as he did so.
Jaina’s hands were still up but that did not mean she could not defend herself. With a subtle touch of the force she brought her lightsaber to her hands from her hip. Still with them raised she looked into the man’s eyes. Seeing nothing but hate there Jaina knew there would be no negotiating with him.
“There’s no need for a fight here. I will simply leave and we can not endanger everyone else” Jaina tried to plead with them. Not out of fear for her own safety but for those innocents in the bar and those outside in nearby buildings.
“I agree there is no need for a fight. Surrender right now and I’ll make sure your death is quick and relatively painless” The man said.
Jaina smiled at him with a mirthless smile and brought her hands down. Placing them inside her sleeves and in front of her she still had the lightsaber in her hand but now her hands and it were covered by her robe. Tilting her head back she allowed her hood to fall from her face and reveal to all that they were right in confirming it was her.
“I’ve heard that exact line from people before. Also been called scum before as well. All oddly enough from the same type of people” Jaina smiled and looked around now at the full compliment of people in the bar who themselves were revealed to be apart of Vulgra’s crew.
“You want to know who those people were?” Jaina didn’t look at the man she looked at everyone else in the room.
There was no reply from any of them but some of them did look at the man.
“Peace Brigade” Jaina said.
Immediately more then half the blasters int eh room turned from her and sighted the man.
“Wait what? No? That was during the war anyways” The man stumbled. All sense of bravado gone.
“I’m sure your friends will understand you sold out the galaxy for the chance to survive” Jaina smiled.
The man’s face became red with rage. He sighted his blaster on her and pulled the trigger.
Jaina’s lightsaber was out of her robe and parried the shot easily but that was all that was needed. The bar erupted into a chaos of blaster fire. Some aimed for her and some aimed for him. Jaina had succeeded in halfing her opponents and was soon making her way through the bar. Away from the Gameroen guards who blocked the entrance she made her way tot eh back and into the kitchen. There she was greeted by a pair of Weequey’s who tried to block her. A telekintic surge and she was pushing them down and out and running through them. At the back of the kitcehn though she was met with a groupd of about twenty. All of different races she knew she could take them but speed was of the essence. Jaina whirled and used the force again to push them against a nearby wall. She couldn’t grab them all though and her way was still blocked. Recognizing that the sound of blaster fire had stopped in the main bar she turned and headed back that way.
Exploding back into the bar with a few of the purserers from the kitcehn Jaina entered into a scene of madness. Bodies lay on the floor. All smoking with blaster holes. She was thankful to see though that the innocnet patrons still huddled bhehidn their tables and chairs were largely fine. At the front though the four Gameroen guards had multipled by four. Sicteen of the massive things now blocked the front and had squeezed into the bar. Behind them was the gigantic form of Vulgra. Sliming his way through the guards and into the bar. The dim light of the bar seemed to highlight his features. Vulgra was easily the largest and most foul Hutt Jaina had ever seen in her life and her hands itched to rech for her blaster and shoot him btu she was not that kind of person. Sixteen Gameron guards also prevented her. The thundering of feet behidn her as welltold her that the back door was being cut off as well. Her eyes though focused on the smoking holes in the bodies of all of his people. They had taken each other out to the man by the looks of it but Jaina knew better. She looked at Vulgra and though Hutts could nto be influanced through the force she knew instantly he had ordered the blood bath.
“Why do this to your own men?” Jaina asked. Her lightsaber at the ready and still on.
“HOHOHOHO they disobeyed orders” Vulgra answered with a massive shrug of his massive shoulders.
“They weren’t ordered to kill me?” Jaina asked in a mockingly accusing tone. Knowing full well that the order had to have been to kill her.
“HOHOHOHO no my Jedi enemy. They were ordered to use stun only. You are to be brought to me alive” Vulgra proclaimed.
Again Jaina could not read him through the force but he seemed sincere. The implications were interesting though to her, if he did not want her killed then why did he want to bring her in?
“Why?” Jaina asked.
“Why kill such a beautiful deadly thing when it can be used in so many other ways…… so many fun ways” Vulgra teased and licked his gigantic lips.
Jaina shuddered and really didn’t want to think about what he could possibly mean. There was only one meaning that came to her mind and she had no wish to entertain it.
“I will do what the great and mighty Jabba had attempted. Unlike your mother you will not escape the chains and enslavement of a Hutt. You will learn to love me and do all for me. You will be my slave” Vulgra proudly declared. His thick and expansive tongue lickign his lips once more.
Jaina shuddered and even had to force back bile from her throat while she thought about hat. She didn’t catch behind her the feet had stopped moving and now there were easily fifty people behind her with another hundred coming in through the front door. The bar was filled with Vulgra’s men and she was surrounded.
“If you think there’s even a remote possibility of that happening you are even crazier then I thought” Jaina said to him. She half turned though to take in all the newcomers. Her other hand reaching down to her other hip and pulling out her blaster.
“You will be broken into my compliant slave and you will enjoy it. You will beg for my cock in your ass HOHOHOHOHOHO” Vulgra’s deep belly full laugh echoed through the bar with the laughter of others joining in.
Jaina leveled her blaster at him and snorted.
“I’d rather die then become a piece of meat for you Vulgra” Jaina declared.
“I’m afraid that is not an option any more Jaina Solo. You will either be taken by force right here or you will surrender. Even with your abilities and your famous Solo luck. You can not survive these odds. Not to mention the destruction it will cause the innocents stuck in harms way” Vulgra seemed so utterly confident that Jaina had to find a way to disappoint him just to see the look on his face.
Good preview of what should be a great story.
ReplyDeleteThanks!, It's coming along well and hopefully I will have it out soon enough. It's going to be a long edit though LOL. Normally I edit as I write, or at least spell check but I haven't done that with this story and there's over a 130 pages already so it'll take a while.
DeleteYour welcome. I look forward to reading the story in full soon.
DeleteHave you written any starwars story with multiple characters like the dc and marvel stories. Hope there will be such a story from u in future.
ReplyDeleteI haven't which is odd really. I have written or started to write stories for Padme, Leia and obviously many with Jaina. I have even started and never finished a story with Rey though my hatred of the sequels is large. I have never combined them mostly because of the time difference between all of them. I could do a Leia and Mara story, Padme and any or all of her handmaidens and Jaina with a bunch of New Jedi order Jedi. I would like to write Padme, Leia and Jaina into a story together all in their primes so to speak so all in their mid twenties but it would obviously have to involve time travel and though it has been done in Star Wars I don't really associate Star Wars with time travel stories, if that makes sense.
DeleteVery good preview. I wonder will Vulgra the Hutt get Alema Rar as another slave alongside Jaina. Two is always better then one.
ReplyDeleteHaha, greedy wanting another. I love Alema Rar, such a strong and passionate character. Considering her history through she would be most likely there as deep cover then anything. No stranger to wetwork so to speak. I would like to say she will be there but this is Jaina centric story. If I were inclined to add another, which I wouldn't as the story is so close to completion I would be tempted to add Tahiri. I have always wanted to write her into a story.
DeleteDon't know about the character Tahiri, could have an epilogue with Alema as a slave alongside Jaina.
DeleteWow you know Alema but not Tahiri. May I ask how you know Alema?
DeleteLimited knowledge of the Expanded Universe.
DeleteAh fair enough. Still find it weird you know about Alema but not Tahiri. To each their own though.
DeleteGreat preview.
ReplyDeleteThanks, short but sweet.
DeleteGreat to see you back
ReplyDelete.The previous jaina stories were semi consensual so this obe will be thrilling.just hoping it will be here before the month ends.
It is certainly a little more extreme then normal but nowhere near the Fairy Tail story in it's themes. The story is done actually just waiting on a friend to help with editing. So I can almost 100% say it will be out before the end of the month
DeleteCould you please release a bit more of the story instead if allof it at once..that will build anticipation while you finish it? The starting was too hot..cant wait..
ReplyDeleteThe preview is actually not the start, it's right towards the start but not the outright beginning of the story. I have thought about posting in multiple chapters but since the whole story is done I'll probably just post it all at once within hopefully the next few days.
DeleteWaiting eagerly.
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